However, these are just my initial reactions and the story has hardly begun, so I may be wrong about the character's relevancy to the plot. Cory's group of friends seem more like a supporting cast for the sake of having a supporting cast, rather than a group of individuals who help him progress through the story. The introduction of Joy made it seem like she would have an impact on the overall story, but her contribution so far has been limited, making me question her relevancy to the story. The only issue with this is that I didn't understand how these characters advanced the story or contributed to the overarching goal. There are many introductions to several different characters at once. Overall, the episode made me want to click on the next episode.Įpisodes 2-8: This is where the story teetered off a bit. Going from an interesting, mysterious event back to normalcy in one episode kind of ruins the tension. However, the extra addition with Isa meeting Cory at the end should occur before Cory meets Emmet in the street. I thought the set up with Cory's family was a great introduction into their family dynamic. I was curious as to why Cory and Emmet were on a plane. If you could capitalize off of these two traits and showcase themes pertaining to gay love and interracial relationships more in your comic, you could really set your comic apart from the rest.Įpisode 1: I thought the first episode was a decent introduction. Having a diverse protagonist in a gay romance situation is quite new, but the execution feels similar to basic heterosexual romance comics such as Luff. I can see a lot of potential in the series, but I haven't encountered a particularly unique quality that sets your comic apart just yet.
#JUST GIVE IT TO ME WEBTOON SERIES#
After reading through the story, it seems like a charming, shounen-esque action series with elements of romance and slice-of-life. Your story hits the mark for these two qualities, however it may be in danger of being too similar to their current lineup of comics. With Webtoon Original stories, they often look for comics that showcase a unique premise with a teenage-oriented demographic. I've amassed quite a lot of knowledge regarding the qualities Webtoon looks for in potential Originals by analyzing series that have been selected from the Canvas section. I'm not featured myself, but I've been interested in being featured for a few years now.